pretty good improv
"I respect your point of view. But this is a Music Video and it is hard to get jokes out based on visuals. Perhaps watch my other Flashes, that aren't Music Videos. And I am only just starting out, so maybe my future Flashes will be more toy our taste. Sorry to disappoint."
this is the response you gave to my first review on this site, of your flash "you make me feel so young". in retrospect, it was a juvenile review and i didn't judge the flash for what it was: a music video. i appreciate that you actually read it and responded, so i decided to take your advice and watch another one of your flashes.
visuals: good, nothing more could be asked of them, smooth animation
voice acting: good, like the nasal quality on Mr. Horse Face
writing/improv: okay, the pauses and "ummm"s aim to create a realistic feel and flow, but it feels somewhat like family guy in its "ehh yeah sorry" approach. at times it didnt feel realistic but instead felt like it was stalling for time. the writing is however backed up with stuff like characters breaking eye contact. this is more on the delivery side of things, but the flash seemed to have overstayed its welcome. it dragged on just a little too long after the initial punch line. luckily it ended barely after getting the awkward cringe laugh, didnt overstay its welcome too long and is fairly well executed improvisation.
i hope this has been constructive and i have viewed your work in context.
Ha ha, I've never had someone respond to a review response in a review before. I appreciate your comments, man. Thanks for the rating!
a very nice collab
the first 8 or so feel mediocre and predictable but the rest were good
some were funny, others v.funny, some had a nice style, others made great use of sound and a few gave a nice angle on the games
i was annoyed at the lack of a pause button, but the scene select made up for it
the only real complaint i have is the 8ish ones that just weren't funny, but thats not a big problem because they're the opening ones and once you get past them the rest is pure gold
this is the first time i've actually been compelled to write a review on ng
this is fantastic
as far as parody goes its amazing
there are alot of funny flashes but this is probably one of the best
i'm glad ye didnt do an angry nintendo nerd carbon copy
original and funny
a very good adventure game.
heres where it lost two stars:
-challenge: it felt too straight forward. i think it could have been more difficult without changing the overall format. i'm not expecting a crazy difficult logically twisted game like the monkey island games, but it could have been more challenging.
-length: it felt too brief. the length wasnt that bad though, i did play until the end, which i wouldnt do with alot of other adventure games. still, i'd like a bit more gameplay.
that said, it was still a solid, enjoyable game that i played til the end. it feels like a very good start in what i expect to be a good series! well done ^^
a very nice game
simple gameplay and simple graphics, all done very nicely.
i liked it, but there was nothing special about it. just catch the stars and avoid the mines.... that was it. if you don't have a goal to work towards the gameplay should keep you going. it didn't. would have given it 8 if you called it "cat shit"
this song kicks ass. and, like a lot of people, i wouldn't have heard it if it wasn't for the flash. brava my fine sir
that ain't punk
thats "oi!", punks nazi skinhead cousin. punk isn't that great to begin with...
aside from that, me likes!
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